nothing crosses the mind except
the thought of your breath falling on my neck like mist on leaves
smelling the aroma of the moments fervor
the tensed muscles yelling for your lips to land and
suck the fever of love I have fallen for
because I know you are a dream but the ache is real.
by
Kritika
https://www.instagram.com/undressedthoughts
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on the mind
our kind
tests from the flesh
not being second best
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Sensual. Splendid.
xoxo
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Thank you kindly π
xoxo
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Always a pleasure sweetheart β€οΈ
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(Heart)
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Wow
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Thank you kindly π
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You’re killing it with pure fire….beautiful lines β¨
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Thank you so much kindly π
Glad that you liked the lines. Happy Day !
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You’re welcome, Kritika….have a peaceful day β¨
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Have an awesome day yourself kindly π π
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Wow… So sensual, but with a depth of emotion. I love this piece Kritika πππ
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Thank you so much ST π
Happy Day!
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This is lovely x
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Thank you so much Khwahish π
Love your name.
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Aw thank you. π
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The bitter sweetness of love penned in poetry so well! β€οΈ
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Happy that you enjoyed the few lines. Thank you so much kindly π (Heart)
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loved it all!!! Pleasure! β€οΈ
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(Heart)
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A lovely piece of sensuous poetry. π
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Thank you so much kindly π π
Happy Day!
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This is wonderfully sensual yet with such deep-rooted emotions. Good one π
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Thank you so much for reading and appreciating π π
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Welcome π
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Intense, sensual, beautifully expressed! Just read your two poems on Spillwords. Congratulations! They are both gorgeous! β€
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Super happy that you liked them.
Thank you for appreciating and supporting always kindly π Means a lot to me. (heart) (Hugs)
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So deep and beautifully sensual!!!
It set my imaginations on fire ππ₯
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Aww you dear ..your putting WP on fire..i love this
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Thank you so much kindly Mich π You are very sweet and kind. (Heart)
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Aww!
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Love it! Thank you so very much kindly π (Hearts)
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My pleasure. β€οΈπ
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(Heart) (Flower)
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Beautifully written, Kritika
Your words bring it to life. βΊοΈπ·
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Happy that you enjoyed the poem. Thank you kindly π (flowers)
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:))
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Our mind play with us like cat play with mouse ππ
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