stars
watchful peacekeepers
informing there presence
by blinking throughout the
night
by
Kritika
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*Picture Credit: Pixel WordPress Gallery
** Poetry Format: Elevenie or Elfchen where Eleven words are arranged in a series which starts from one word in the first line followed by 2 then 3 and 4 in respective lines and ends with 1 word unlike the 1st word.
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so beautiful Kritika thanks for sharing xo
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Thank you kindly π xo
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sun
and light
in the deep dark
black and blue night
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Profound
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You’re welcome Kritika β¨
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Beautiful… Such beautiful wording π
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Thank you so much ST π
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There’s nothing better than watching the π
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Yes!
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You’re very welcome!
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Beautiful poem, Kritika. β€
And judging from the number of wars and conflicts going on around the world, there are obviously not many people looking up at the stars judging from their actions.
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Rightly said. Glad you found the poem beautiful. π
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It makes me feel safe β¨π
Quite beautiful
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Yes me too. π
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Absolutely! Lovely…
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Glad you found it lovely. π
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My pleasure always. π
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Lovely
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I had been busy. Read your poem after many weeks. so refreshing Kritika. Blessings always
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stars twinkle bright
giving us delight!
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Yes! They are magical.
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my pleasure π
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Dreamy ππ«
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Awesome.. Loved it kritika.. π€ππΌπ
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Thank you kindly π (Hug) (Heart)
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Awesome photo and poem, Kritika! I love looking at the night sky! β€ β€ β€ Hope things are going well!
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I too enjoy watching the night sky. So calm and peaceful and so much talking to be done with self. (Heart)
Yes things are going great and I will surely make them great. Have learned a lot and need to experience more to learn more about Myself.
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I have no doubt that you will make whatever you do great! β€
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Thank you so much kindly π Your words motivate me. (Hearts)
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Thank you kindly π
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Amazing
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Thank you Athira π
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A lovely haiku poem. Absolutely beautiful
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Sorry but it is Elfchen or Elevenie. I am sorry to have not mentioned the same.
Thank you so much for appreciating π
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Elfchen… A new style for me then. Hope to write this form of poetry someday…
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Looking forward to read your Elfchen π
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Sure…
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