hear the beating heart
stronger than your arms
tear it will not
even if you are apart
close to your world
the heart could not stay
time turned the red roses
lifeless in your atmosphere
by
Kritika
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Short & precise….nicely written
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Thank you kindly π
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You’re welcome β¨
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my being
heart a machine
almost battery
and brain dead
and not in my head
the left side
hurt
like all fuck
you know?
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Wow.
Powerful poem, Kritika.
I particularly love those last lines
time turned the red roses
lifeless in your atmosphere
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Thank you for appreciating kindly π
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Time is eternal. Your poem makes me pause and reflect.
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Rightly said. Thank you kindly π (Heart)
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A pleasure my friend.
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Talking about passion. Gorgeous β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you so much kindly π (Hearts)
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My pleasure sweetheart πΉβ€οΈ
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Lovely blog! Your poems are so powerful and also motivating β€οΈ btw, this blog attracted me as my friend’s name is Kritika tooπ
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Great. Thank you for reading and appreciating kindly π π
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Wow, beautifully written!
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Lovely poemβ€οΈ.
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Thank you kindly π (Heart)
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Sometimes, so very true π₯π
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Thank you kindly for appreciating π
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Always welcome π
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So beautiful, Kritika! Strong enough to escape a poisonous relationship! That is the ideal, is it not? To be the “master of your fate.” (borrowed from “Invictus”)
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Strong one needs to be to face the world. One never knows when will the other change. So we have to be the master of our own fates. I am inspired by this line,’ Master of your fate’ and I always feel a connection with these words. Thank you so much kindly for reading and commenting π (Heart) (Hug)
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