
the conspiratorial ocean conjured
two souls meant to be one, lured
kissed under the beautiful lit sky
approaching an island, sighing Dry
feet submerged in wet sand with sun ablaze
hat and sunglasses on, confronting the beautiful phase
only in dreams, confessed to the sailor, I saw
happy I accepted this opportunity no second thought came to forgo
a densely populated forest lay ahead
to the fruit laden trees my intestines need to be fed
cruel sailor warned of the side effects
his concerned brows struck my heart with love defect
to him I asked when will I touch the suns rays
he said this is the end, now find your ways
moving forward getting deeper inside the dense forest
no space left where the rays would not have rest
further and farther my feet wandering faster
how can this be the end, analysing mind is the master
sailor behind provoking me to find the answer
unaware he is, my mind is a skilled dancer
under the sun I stand, not a single space uncovered
I already touched the first rays when the rising Sun was discovered
smiling at my stupid curiosity of shaking hands with suns rays
we both laughed loud as we meet the rays everyday
the sailor and I relaxed to see the dawn coloured sky
eating fruits and talking about life’s hues and cries
intertwining fingers showed love and care for each other
the return journey began with discussions about our future together
by
Kritika
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ahhhhhh… what can i say dear.. this is one beautiful stupid poetic/creative brilliance
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So sweet of you Mich. You are awesome. (Hugs)
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This is wow. I just loved the thoughts and the colour behind this beautiful poem.
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I am happy that you enjoyed the poetical journey. Thank you for the ‘WOW’ comment π
Keep Smiling. Happy Day π
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So beautiful π
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Thank you Era for finding the journey beautiful. π
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you too ππ€
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What a nicely constructed poetical story! A reading “journey” worth taking, for sure.
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(Wide smile) Thank you for the ‘WOW’ comment Benjamin. π
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Happy Day π
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You’re welcome. And thanks. You have a happy day, as well!
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Thank you π
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This is so beautifully articulated!
“smiling at my stupid curiosity of shaking hands with suns rays
we both laughed loud as we meet the rays everyday”
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Regards,
Rupa.
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Amazing that you felt this journey to be beautifully crafted. Thank you for the ‘WOW’ comment Rupa.
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Fanstastic. ππ
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Thank you for the beautiful comment Anjali.
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Always Kritika. ππ€π₯°
Youu too dear.
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I really enjoyed reading this and loved the beauty of this poem. Very inspirational!
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Glad you found the poem inspirational. Thank you kindly π
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Beautiful.. As usual.. ππΌπππΌππΌππΌπ€π
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Thank you so much kindly π π
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Glistening voyage… amazing imagery…
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Thank you so much π π
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Hey Kritika – Happy Wednesday to you π
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Thank you so much for the tag π Savage Garden is love (Heart)
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Always a pleasure Kritika π
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A warm sun filled journey…brings to mind a quiet time with a caring soul. Lovely π·
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True indeed. Thank you kindly π·π
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Love this narrative poem, Kritika. π
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Happy you liked it. Thank you π
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Youβre welcome. π
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Just lovely!!!
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Beautiful! Love the words and imagery π
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Thank you kindly π
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Just letting you know that I miss you my friend π Hope you are well
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Hey ST,
Hugs and Love. Will be back soon. π
I am very well. Hope you are doing great.
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This is so beautiful
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Thank you kindly ππ
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This is woww β£οΈ
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Thank you so much π π
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Beautifully expressed, Kritika!
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Thank you so much kindly π π
Happy Day π
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