
Seeking purity in love like old days
No idea if it exists in anyways
Time has changed me and you
Every relationship is like amount due
Demands payment from both the sides
Wait till its done, the next is up in line
Transactions, do they ever end?
Me and you, we seem to only pretend.
This truth I have analysed and perceived
Experience from these transactions I have received
Cannot vouch about loves definition
Sometimes I guess it is the moments satisfaction
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Kritika
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Love can fill the gaps …
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yes, indeed. π Thank you for reading.
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Pleasure reading your emotions
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Beautifully written π
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Thank you Era for appreciating π
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Too many transactions sometimes but love can do everything ππ
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True that is. Thank you kindly ππ·π
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Lovely. πππ
Time has changed me and you
Every relationship is like amount due – I really loved these two lines of your poem. π
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Time may have changed but the meaning of the words is still the same.
Thank you for appreciating Anjali π π
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I agree with you Kritika.
Anytime. No need of thanks. πππ₯°
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No, transactions don’t end!π
Nicely expressed, Kritika. π
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Sadly they don’t. π¦
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You are welcome, dear. π
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very well written Kritika…. but, yes i must agree for some this is true
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Agree with you. Thank you so much kindly π π
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βSeeking purity in love like old days
No idea if it exists in anyways
Time has changed me and you
Every relationship is like amount due.β
Brilliant writing, Kritika β¨π
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Pleased to know you enjoyed reading it. Thank you for the WOW comment Nathi πππ·
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Always my pleasure π
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Hello sweetheart πββοΈ Hope all is well π·
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Hey, how are you?
I am doing good. Thank you π π
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