If I was angry, your kiss would have solved the purpose.
If I was angry, your hug would have calmed me.
If I was angry, you could have shared a chocolate.
If I was angry, you could have hold my hand.
If I was angry, you could have made me to smile with your jokes.
You have nothing for me.
This is me alone thinking, what changed you.
Now I am tired.
Peace, please.
by
Kritika
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Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA π
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Very well expressed.
(Side note: It should be *held, not hold; “made me smile”, without “to”.)
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Woops. Thank you for correcting me π.
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Your piece was really good and I thought it could benefit from some minor changes. π Stay golden!
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Thank you so much. ππ You too π
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I remember this poem…any particular reason you’ve posted it again? Perhaps feeling of anger?
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Thank you for remembering the same.π Re-Posting for the new readers to know I wrote like this initially. π·
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Got it now…..you’ve really developed your style…..it’s good back then as well…..today, I do sense a different tinge…..I’ve always admired your writings…..plus you’re crazy good with digital sketching…..heart is the common factor β¨πΉ
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I myself feel amazed with my writing. Thank you so much for appreciating and supporting always. ππ
I am happy you enjoy viewing my digital art.
Heart indeed is the common factor. Learning and trying to better myself. ππ·π
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You’re already at a different league, Kritika. Simply keep believing in yourself & remain connected to your heart, the rear will unfold itself β¨β€οΈβοΈ
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Thank you for these encouraging words. Your words mean a lot. β₯οΈπ·
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You’re always welcome β¨β€οΈ
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most likely wish it was just anger but the truth is vital to know so you can move on. Nicew Kritika!
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Indeed. Thank you kindly πππ·
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Always β€οΈ Kritika!
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π (Heart)
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lol… this made me smile dear…
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Hahaha I know I too smiled reading it again.
Thank you so much kindly π π
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