
Not The Kiss
I don’t want to kiss you now
I want to steal your stare
I want to see the world in your eyes
and drown in that atmosphere
I don’t want to kiss you now
I want to watch your lips
speaking about life and love
and many more pleasing things
I don’t want to kiss you now
I want to liberate in your presence
inhale the aroma of your calm soul
and soak in my favourite fragrance
Kritika
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Thank you kindly π
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Welllll THIS is intoxicating!! Beautiful, you are on a roll gal! πππ
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Really glad this piece inspired you to write a mesmerising one. Thank you so much Lia for the beautiful comment. π (Heart)
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Thank you… π₯°π I am glad too… I felt great about that piece, which rarely happens. Thanks for the amazing inspiration Kritika… please keep up the good work. ;)) π€©ππ―ββοΈπ
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“I want to liberate in your presence
inhale the aroma of your calm soul
and soak in my favourite fragrance”….the pure essence….what a beautiful poem you’ve written, Kritika.
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Pleased to know that you enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for appreciating kindly π
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Beautifully written Kritika, so tender π
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Thank you so much ST π (Heart)
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Iβm a fan of this! The imagery and description are so powerful that I could picture the whole scene in my mind π«β¨
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This is a WOW comment for me. Thank you so much Hannah for this fabulous comment π π
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Iβm glad to have made it to the βwowβ category and you are most welcome, my friend π·
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Kritika, this is a spectacular poem! It speaks about really getting to know someone. Without that knowledge, kisses probably won’t mean much! Very well-written and wise. The repeated first line of each verse is very effective.
I hope all is well with you! Cheryl
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I wrote this poem a long time back but fixed it, to my satisfaction, yesterday. Thank you so much Cheryl for the loving words. π (Hug)
I am doing well. Thank you kindly π
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Conversation and getting to know one another before kissing.
A well written poetic summation of that time before the big kiss.
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Actually this was the scenario in my mind while writing this one. Thank you for figuring this out and appreciating the same π π
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Brilliant writing. Can’t be done much better!
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Another WOW comment. Glad you enjoyed the writing. Thank you so much Benjamin π π
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Beautifully penned β₯οΈ
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I am happy that you found it ‘Beautiful’. Thank you so much Shweta π
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You are very welcome π
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Fragrant essence of love, speaks here. Beautiful Kritika!
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Thank you so much for feeling the words. π (Heart)
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Wow.. great write. I went and shared it here: https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/08/19/not-the-e-kiss-kritika-undressed-thoughts/
Because I have posted your poetry before with your permission, I have assumed the same with this piece. If that’s not the case, please just let me know. π
Cheers and thanks for sharing
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Thank you π. Okay. No problem. π
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Hi,
Can you make some changes in the post?
Like the title is,” Not the Kiss” and website URL: http://www.undressedthoughts.com
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Quite beautiful! π·π€
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Thank you so much kindly π
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Hugs π€
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you π π
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Always happy to share your posts with followers Kritika!
xoxo
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Omg..this gives goosebumps
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Pleased to know you liked it so much. Thank you Akshita for the amazing comment. π
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Words poured with emotions…loved this piece
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Glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you for the beautiful comment π
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Lovely
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Thank you kindly ππ
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