the intertwining of the breeze with the leaves
captivated eyes get a dose of relief

moon smiling bright at the romantic connection
lighting the dark for the eyes to feel

the tender breeze kissing and whispering love
eyes long to taste this precious pleasure

stars blinking, sighing, watching such affection
dreamy eyes in hunt of this treasure

celestial bodies sprinkle powder of love in nature
the hopeful eyes observe this peacefully

moon, stars, breeze and leaves are valuable creation
making the eyes believe, love exists honestly


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Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA πŸ™‚


  1. Kritika, you’re getting better & better with every single new poem you publish. This one is magnificent…”lighting the dark for the eyes to feel”…amazing line…I’m always looking forward to read your beautiful poems…written from your heart….✨❀️

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