HelPleSs

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Helpless

words formed virga
left me in middle
outpouring was fluent
now is a riddle

helpless scratching
rounding of head
thoughts reside
off link instead

by
Kritika

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Published by Kritika

Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA 🙂

40 Comments

  2. This is crazy beautiful poem….
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  8. I love the last lines “thoughts reside / off link instead” odd but lovely!! Sometimes things need to go “off link” to get connected again. ;)) Hugs and have a lovely day Kritika!

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  14. Wowww Kritika.. As I said you’re unique dear. See how you’re crafting your words beautifully.
    Yeah sometimes we used block in the middle but here you expressed that in beautiful words. 😊😊

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