softness of the green grass adorned in new clothes after the rains fill them with a kiss a comfort to the painful soul
the feet feel the luxury of love rains made with the green turf once the skin meets this comfort mind overpasses the problematic stuff
the pale eyes rekindle with joy vibrancy engulfs heart and mind jump and walk and play and run mirabilia of nature aids to open all blinds
by Kritika
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Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA 🙂
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A peaceful, happy poem, Kritika! It is the rainy season here, and our grass is neon green. Seeing and feeling it underfoot gives a feeling of wellbeing. Hope all is well with you. Cheryl
It’s my pleasure…I read so many of your works and all were so different and amazing…I still couldn’t read all..I’ll come back again to read them..they are exceptionally well written!!
Beautiful! Loved this! 😃
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Thank you Harsh 😊🌸
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A peaceful, happy poem, Kritika! It is the rainy season here, and our grass is neon green. Seeing and feeling it underfoot gives a feeling of wellbeing. Hope all is well with you. Cheryl
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Wonderful!
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Thank you so much for the awesome comment 🙂 🙂
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You are most welcome 🙂
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😊🌷
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Lovely Kritika… I was particularly taken with the line… “feet feel the luxury of love”
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I am glad that you liked the line ST. Thank you 🙂 🙂
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This poem definitely captures the essence of walking and running on soft green grass after a summer rain. ❤
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Yes. Embracing the weather, leaving behind the worries. Thank you kindly 🙂
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This is such a musical piece!
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An awesome comment. Thank you so much kindly 🙂
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My pleasure, Kritika!
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🙂 🙂
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inspired me to go run to my lawn and jump in the pool. I can feel the grass on my feet before I step foot on it. thanks🙏
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This is wow. Truly amazing. I am glad you can feel my words.
My pleasure always to share my thoughts 🙂
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It was so well written, it grabbed me to get up and get out which was so needed! Feeling words that capture attention are gifts!🙏
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Thank you so very much. Your words mean a lot me. I am really happy you got out and felt it. This is wonderful. ❤
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Just as it is with life…beautifully written 😊🌷
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I did not see it from this perspective but yes it is with life too. This is profound. Thank you so much kindly for this thoughtful comment. 🙂 (Flower)
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Your writing is very beautiful and inspiring. 😊🌷
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I am pleased to have such awesome readers who guide me by their words 🙂 🙂
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😊✨💖
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I love nature, your poetry and words
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Nature is love. Thank you so much for the lovely comment kindly 🙂
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My absolute pleasure
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😊😊
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Very Nice
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Glad you like it. Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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Ah, the feel of the soft green grass, is preciously divine. Lovely composition Kritika ❣️
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Indeed is. Thank you so much kindly 🙂
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To walk barefoot on wet grass! You took me back to childhood, Kritika! Lovely verse. ❤️
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Feels like luxury when on wet grass. I am happy that you enjoyed the read. Thank you kindly ❤🌷
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So it does! My pleasure, dear. 🌷❤️
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😊😊
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Feet on the ground and feel the nature.
This poem is fantastic.
Hug.
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Yes. Feels great.
Thank you so much for the beautiful comment.
Hugs
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Ahhh lovely tribute to our nature kritika..
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I am happy you thought so about this piece of art. Thank you Mich 🙂 (Hug)
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❤❤❤
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❤
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lovely, nature heals in many ways 🙂
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Nature is magical ✨😊
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Thank you kindly 🌷
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you’re most welcome!
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😊💕
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Loved it ❤️ had no words to say. It’s very beautiful.
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Once you embrace nature you feel surrounded by love.
I am glad my words made you feel this way 😊😍 Thank you so much Mitty 😁
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Absolutely 💜
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Wonderfully expressed… Lovely words…
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Thank you so much Piyush 🙂 🙂
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Loved it!
I have a small request to make…please check out my blog when you have time!!❣❣
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Ah please do not request. Its is my pleasure to read your work. Thank you for admiring my efforts on so many of my works. Thank you kindly 🙂
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It’s my pleasure…I read so many of your works and all were so different and amazing…I still couldn’t read all..I’ll come back again to read them..they are exceptionally well written!!
Thanks a ton!!😘😘
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I am pleased you found my work different and amazing. Thank you so much for filling my day with beautiful comments 🙂
Pleasure is mine. 🙂
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