invent your ingenuous desires impress them on my lips to bind intertwining fissures on each impassionate melting sublime
originality flowing from our lips opaque emitting light of love opening the two hearts together oblivious souls forming nimbus
poetry within me written by you paragraphs match to complete pacifying the insides and outsides painting perfect chemistry
by Kritika
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Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA π
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Your lovely words reminded me one of my most favorite quote “we loved with a love that was more than love…”. Thank you for capturing and sharing the true essence of love!
Thanks and you too m’dear. And in case it wasn’t clear in my first comment, by “I agree with all the above,” I’d meant, I agreed with all the above *comments.* :)) Benjamin’s in particular. :)) Sorry I wrote a bit too fast. Hugs to last. π€π€π
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Thank you Kim π
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Your lovely words reminded me one of my most favorite quote “we loved with a love that was more than love…”. Thank you for capturing and sharing the true essence of love!
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My pleasure always in sharing words which capture the beauty in love ππ·. Thank you so much for reading and kind comment π
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π₯π₯π₯ Fabulous π
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You are awesome ST. Thank you so much π π
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Breathtaking poetry! “oblivious souls forming nimbus”. The whole last stanza was such a good finish!
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What a beautiful desire – loved it
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Happy that you love the poem. Thank you kindly π
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My absolute pleasure
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Kritika, this poem is magical! Evocative, beautiful, and romantic! Your words describe the moment perfectly.
Thank you for sharing these beautiful thoughts. Take care. Cheryl
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Glad you think is magical. I love the word magic π
Thank you kindly π
You too take care.
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Amazing poem
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Thank you Ayush π
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Wonderful and beautifully sensual romantic poem. β€
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Thank you for the lovely comment kindly π
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beautiful words on our anniversay….. thank you
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Oh wow. Is it your anniversary?
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It was yesterday, Yes! I may post something my daughter wrote to us yesterday.,. it was soooo sweet!
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Belated Anniversary π
Would love to read it.
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Thank you so much! I’ll make sure to post.. thanks
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Great!
Happy blogging π
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Thanks and you too!
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Thank you π
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Beautiful π·
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Hope you are doing well.
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ah what a delightfully loving fairytale π
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Thank you so much Kate π
Indeed is a fairy tale.
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seldom is a relationship really like that, or possibly in those first few ‘honeymoon’ months π
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Guess you are right.
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sadly I speak from experience …
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xoxo
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Absolutely incredible!
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Glad you thought so. Thank you Harsh π
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I agree with all the above… but this line my fave: “poetry within me written by you” Love. π€©πππ
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Mine too. I was playing around the same in the whole poem. Thank you for liking the line, Lia π
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I loved the whole poem!! A delight to read in my morning feed. Love and light filled and a hit of passion for the session. Ahhh. πππ
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Wonderful comment Lia. A delight it is to know that it made your morning passionate π Have a love filled and romantic day π π
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Thanks and you too m’dear. And in case it wasn’t clear in my first comment, by “I agree with all the above,” I’d meant, I agreed with all the above *comments.* :)) Benjamin’s in particular. :)) Sorry I wrote a bit too fast. Hugs to last. π€π€π
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I got your first comment rightly then. I thought of the same that you are agreeing on the comments above.
Please do not be sorry. (Hugs) (Heart)
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Such an evocative and eloquent composition Kritika. Beautiful β€οΈ
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You are amazing. Thank you kindly π (Heart)
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Great piece. Love the line ‘poetry within me written by you’. Happy Poetry Day.
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Happy that you loved the line. Thank you for the kind read and comment π
Happy Poetry Day π π
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Pleasure.
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Happy Day.
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poetry within me written by you
paragraphs match to complete
pacifying the insides and outsides
painting perfect chemistry….
Oh dear Kritika, this one is on point…. i so love it
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Happy that the lines touched you. Thank you so much Mich. π
Hope you are doing well. Keep Safe π
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Amazingβ€οΈ
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Pleased you like it. Thank you so much Mitty π π
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Whoa! Beautifully romantic and sensuous poem, My Dear!! Bellissimo!!
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Delighted you enjoyed the poem. Thank you so much for the amazing comment and always appreciating and re-blogging my work. π π
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Your words reached out to me!!! I always am happy to have a chance to share your words with followers too!!
xoxo
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you so much kindly π
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Always a joy to share your words, My Dear!!! Wishing you a great week! Be safe!
xoxo
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Have a great week you too π
Stay Safe.
xoxo
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Gorgeous
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Enticing! π
do visit my site also!
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Thank you for the lovely comment π
Surely will.
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Such loveliness!
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Welcome π
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If only the Chemistry lectures were that interesting..!!
Great poem, Kritika.. β₯οΈπ
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I second your thought. π
Thank you so much π
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You are most welcome.. ππ
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Different writing thnx to share this lovely post
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My pleasure always to share my thoughts. Thank you so much kindly π
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I think this is so amazing. So different and interesting.
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Amazingly!!
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Glad that you enjoyed reading it. π
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Enjoyed the post π
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Delighted you enjoyed the post. Thank you so much kindly π
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Just wow just wow…
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