her carefree dance in the rain attracted the only soul passing by the water drops hiding her pain he saw that hollow glint in her eyes
watched her madness in distress from an irresistible distance walked towards his princess to let her know her prince’s existence
she accepted his hand with no fright they danced on the rhythm of the rain glistening under the moon light unspoken promises forever to remain
by Kritika
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Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA π
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Ah, dancing in the rain! Nice photo, too. Just last week, I took my morning walk in light rain. Some people equate tears and rain, but I more often think of rain with pure joy. I love your poem, Kitrika!
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Thank you so much ππ·
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Ah, dancing in the rain! Nice photo, too. Just last week, I took my morning walk in light rain. Some people equate tears and rain, but I more often think of rain with pure joy. I love your poem, Kitrika!
I hope you are doing well.
Cheryl
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Thank you Cheryl. π·
Mostly rain does associate with wiping off the tears of an individual. True that is.
You are very sweet and loving. π€
Doing very well. Hope your health is better. π
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This is just so lovely π
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Thank you ST. (Heart)
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A fascinating romance in poetic lines!
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Thank you so much kindly π
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You are very welcome, Kritika.
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Wow.
That’s really beautiful, Kritika. β€
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Thank you kindly for your constant appreciation and support π π
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You’re very welcome. ππ
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Beautiful
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Thank you Haroon π
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You’re welcome
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I love this, together with the image too, it’s beautiful. ππ¦π»
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Thank you so much Lia. You are very sweet. π π
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much Harsh π π
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Love the beautiful aura you created here β dreamy
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Feels like a Hallmark movie. π
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Haha. All credit goes to you my friend
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Thank you so very much π·
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Love, rain, dance and moonlight just so perfect Kritika β₯οΈ
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Thank you kindly π π
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Beautifully penned and imbued with delightful imagery. Happy Poetry Writing Day.
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Thank you so much kindly π
You too have a Happy Poetry Writing Day π
Cheers.
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Thanks. Best Regards
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Always happy to share your posts with followers, My Dear!!
xoxo
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So lovely Kritika. π π
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Indeed it is lovely like a fairy tale, right?
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Yes… just like a fairy tale. π§ββοΈπ
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Thank you Suzanne. π π
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That’s beautiful. You are really an awesome poet π
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Thank you so much kindly π π
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It’s so lovely π Dancing in rain with a love, wow!! Sensuous.
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Utopian it seems to be. Sensuous it has to be. π
Thank you Mitty for your beautiful comment. π
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Haha! Now I started to like your reply.
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ππ Magnetism did its work.
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Wonderfully expressed!
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Thank you for reading and kind comment π
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