suRprIse

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Surprise

The water splash was a tight slap to my unstoppable tears. While wiping my face, it slapped me again and soaked me completely in its coolness. The transition of the road to sea left me aghast. Rubbed my eyes thrice but it was still present. Nipped the upper arm to check the reality. ‘Where am I?’ was the question my mind and heart together vociferated and a knock on my shoulder assuaged the sudden fear.

I reminisced the moment when my mouth spoke the opposite of my eyes which bravely faced that of the most handsome man. The same affectionate eyes present at the very scene were looking at me with the same love, weakening my knees but something was strange in his appearance which was confirmed by my looking down his waist. ‘Where are your legs?’ I asked to which he grabbed my hand and said, ‘Lets go home.’ Surprisingly mine too were the same as I toppled on the sand.

‘What the hell is wrong with us? Where are we? What is going on? Would you say something?’ I squawked but he ignored and lifted me up. We dived into the sea.

Chapter 1
Micro Series: Thaumaturgy of Time (Link to Chapter 0)

By
Kritika

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43 thoughts on “suRprIse

  1. Kritika, My first thought is that you became a mermaid, maybe not the interpretation you had in mind…Anyway, I enjoyed a story that stirs the imagination. Maybe there is even a message of how much relationships can alter your life.

    Hope all is well with you!

    Cheryl

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    1. Hey Cheryl,
      I am very well. Thank you. I am sorry to not have asked you about your health. How is your health? Hope it is better now.

      You imagination is the same as mine on this. I just wanted the readers to capture the same. No idea as to how will it move.

      Thank you so much for appreciating my work always. Means wonders to me. πŸ™‚

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      1. Kririka, thank you for asking about my health. I am still on a very restrictive diet and trying to gradually transition off of it. It may take a while. Otherwise, I am feeling very well. I had a misdiagnosis in the hospital. The correct diagnosis is less severe, and I will not require surgery. Yay!

        Take care. Stay well and happy!

        Cheryl

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      2. Glad that you dont require a surgery. Yeppiii. Guess will take a while for the diet to change. Hope you start eating whatever you like soon.

        You too take good care. Be happy. Keep smiling.πŸ˜ŠπŸ™‚πŸŒ·πŸ’•

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