The water splash was a tight slap to my unstoppable tears. While wiping my face, it slapped me again and soaked me completely in its coolness. The transition of the road to sea left me aghast. Rubbed my eyes thrice but it was still present. Nipped the upper arm to check the reality. ‘Where am I?’ was the question my mind and heart together vociferated and a knock on my shoulder assuaged the sudden fear.
I reminisced the moment when my mouth spoke the opposite of my eyes which bravely faced that of the most handsome man. The same affectionate eyes present at the very scene were looking at me with the same love, weakening my knees but something was strange in his appearance which was confirmed by my looking down his waist. ‘Where are your legs?’ I asked to which he grabbed my hand and said, ‘Lets go home.’ Surprisingly mine too were the same as I toppled on the sand.
‘What the hell is wrong with us? Where are we? What is going on? Would you say something?’ I squawked but he ignored and lifted me up and we dived into the sea.
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Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA π
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Kritika, My first thought is that you became a mermaid, maybe not the interpretation you had in mind…Anyway, I enjoyed a story that stirs the imagination. Maybe there is even a message of how much relationships can alter your life.
Kririka, thank you for asking about my health. I am still on a very restrictive diet and trying to gradually transition off of it. It may take a while. Otherwise, I am feeling very well. I had a misdiagnosis in the hospital. The correct diagnosis is less severe, and I will not require surgery. Yay!
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Happy you loved it. Thank you so much for reading π
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Kritika, My first thought is that you became a mermaid, maybe not the interpretation you had in mind…Anyway, I enjoyed a story that stirs the imagination. Maybe there is even a message of how much relationships can alter your life.
Hope all is well with you!
Cheryl
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Hey Cheryl,
I am very well. Thank you. I am sorry to not have asked you about your health. How is your health? Hope it is better now.
You imagination is the same as mine on this. I just wanted the readers to capture the same. No idea as to how will it move.
Thank you so much for appreciating my work always. Means wonders to me. π
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Kririka, thank you for asking about my health. I am still on a very restrictive diet and trying to gradually transition off of it. It may take a while. Otherwise, I am feeling very well. I had a misdiagnosis in the hospital. The correct diagnosis is less severe, and I will not require surgery. Yay!
Take care. Stay well and happy!
Cheryl
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Glad that you dont require a surgery. Yeppiii. Guess will take a while for the diet to change. Hope you start eating whatever you like soon.
You too take good care. Be happy. Keep smiling.πππ·π
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Amazing read!
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Glad you enjoyed the read. Thank you ST π
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π Love the series!! So mysterious!!
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Glad you loved it. Thank you so much kindly π
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Interesting already, makes me want to read more…π
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Super excited to write the next chapter now. Thank you so much kindly π
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I take it that this is a merman that the heroine has encountered.
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Spot on. π
Thank you for reading kindly π
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You’re very welcome. π
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It’s interesting π waiting for your upcoming posts yaar.
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Glad you enjoyed the Chapter. Thank you for reading and appreciating π π
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It’s my pleasure dearπ
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Such brilliance!! Well written, Kritikaπ
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Thank you so much Nathi. Means a lot from a reader π π
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Always my pleasure π Keep writing & inspiring βοΈ
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Happy to share always π
Will always try to. π Thank you Nathi π xx
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Interesting start Kritika π
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Thank you so much kindly π
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Hmmm…
Looking forward to the next chapter after a promising start, Krtika. π
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Would try to maintain the rhythm.
Thank you so much kindly π
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You are so welcome. π
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Have a great day.
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I love it very much Kritika. The sentences flow. It’s atmospheric. It’s beautiful. Bravo.
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You are amazing. Thank you so very much kindly π
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My pleasure sweetheart β€οΈ
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wow wow wow – loved the imagination and the end
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A wide smile. Delighted you enjoyed and loved it. Thank you π π
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My absolute pleasure
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Well done on the suspense! π·
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Tried to keep it this way. Thank you for appreciating π π
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