But for me were those lips Speaking words like melody Forcing me to reach for a kiss Wish could discover more Under the hat the eyes lay hidden Is she my ultimate shore? Or shall I be forbidden?
by Kritika
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Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA π
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Beautifully expressed!
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Thank you ππ
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Picture and poem are perfect together. ππππβ€οΈπ
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Thank you Lia. You are awesome π π
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As are you, Kritika. π₯° Thanks so much for the morning smiles. :)) :)) ππ
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My pleasure Lia. Have a cheerful day π
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I love this poem. β€ππ₯°
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Thank you so much π π
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like water
for chocolate
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Thank you for reading and commenting π
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I like the way you left it in a question. So nicely done πΈ:)
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Thank you so much kindly π π
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Beautiful, Kritika!
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Thank you Susi π π
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You’re very welcome, Kritika! π
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Beautiful writing with a stunning pic Kritika β£οΈ
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Thank you so much kindly π
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Kritika, “Is she my ultimate shore?” ππ
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Glad you enjoyed the piece, Thank you so much π π
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Beautifully expressed. Deep thoughts, Kritika! π
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Thank you so much kindly π
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Ow wow i can feel the angst yet there is gentleness in the end ..β€
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Thank you so much kindly π
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Amazing
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Thank you Newtan. π
Your website looks great. Attractive and interactive.
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Thank you so much. π
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My pleasure π
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very nice
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Thank you π
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Wonderful π€
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Thank you kindly π
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No problem π€π€
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Love, love that line: “Is she my ultimate shore?”
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The last line is a catcher, indeed. Thank you so much kindly π
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Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much π
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