
Air between Us
The air between us
Had a different touch
Shimmery and slippery
Towards you, towards us
That stealthy look of your chest
Skipping of heart beat as I rest
My head on your toned shoulder
Desire to reflect I am bolder
The warmth melting on your lips
as we long waited for this kiss
One that matches a hot chocolate sip
dripping from the sleek finger tips
by
Kritika
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Kritika, “The Air Between Us” leaves me in awe. The imagery is unique, vivid, and very relatable.
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So very much happy this piece resonated with you. You are awesome Cheryl. Thank you so much β€π€
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Another wonderful piece.
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Dazzling imagery in this beautiful romantically erotic poem. β€
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Beautiful & sensual….”One that matches a hot chocolate sipβ¨dripping from the sleek finger tips”
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Your words draw a sensuous imagery Kritika β₯οΈ
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So beautiful!
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A wonderful romantic poem.
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Beautifully romantic, My Dear!! Loved it!!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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wonderful , a smile came to my face as i reached the end… just wow
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Wonderful sensitive poem!πΈ
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Romance isn’t dead.
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Great title! Greater words!
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