Concordance

The form of poetry is Elevenie or Elfchen in German (Elf-eleven). A short poem where 11 words are spread in five rows with the starting and ending line having one word. Second line has two, third has three and fourth has four completing the poem with satisfaction.
This is my first Elevenie on this blog and my first digital painting too.
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Awesomeπ…..i would wish to try it out…
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Try it for sure. π
Thank you for reading and commenting. π·
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This is so awesome! Loved it!
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Thank you ππ»
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Amazingππ€©π as always
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c me
comfort
clothes
and food
cos i am now in the mood
good prose
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Alliteration at its best
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You’re welcome
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Your digital painting was cute β€οΈ
Thank you for this poem. I loved it
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Thank you so much Mitty πβ€
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Most welcome
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Well expressed, Kritika!
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My pleasure.ππ·
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Great digital painting.
Love your elevenie. β€
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Thank you so much β€π
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Concordance – new word for me. Also new to me is the Elevenie. I like the theme and what you’ve done with it. :)) Thanks for sharing, Kritika. Also love the blooms… clean and pretty. πππ·π
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Thank you so much Lia. β€π·
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Very cool!! ππ»
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Thank you M πππ
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The digital painting is really wonderful. worth framing. I had to read the Elevenie a few times. Not a single word is without a meaning or context. Very well written. I could just picture the Universal chaos , its various aspects and the underlying concordance. To be understood. You made my day through your amazing writing. Blessings for grand success.
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Thank you so much Sir for your constant support and appreciation. Means a lot to me. β€ππ·
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Hey! That is brilliant creativity Kritika, with amazing alliteration too!! Thanks for sharing this form of poem. Will try it ππ»β£οΈ
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Thank you so much Radhika for appreciating and motivating me always π π
It is a fun form of poetry. This was my first time giving it an alliteration effect. Do try.
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Beautifully done on both counts of New! π₯
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Thank you so much Suzanne. I am glad that you liked both of them. (heart)
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So much so β€οΈ
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(Heart)
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simply gorgeous – chaos in your word personified β€οΈ
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Thank you kindly π π
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My absolute pleasure
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For the first try on both, you’ve done a great job, Kritika! π
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Thank you so much Susi. π π
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You are very welcome, Kritika! π
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Nice one
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Thank you π
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Wow…πππi love how you nailed the form ..few words yet very powerful
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Thank you so much Mich. π
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I will try that one tooπ
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Now I will wait for it. π π
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The poem really puts life to the already beautiful painting. Wish to see more such amazing artwork from you.
Best wishes from The Strong Traveller and have a great day.
Do have a look at my blog whenever you find the time. There are some travel and lifestyle content which you may find interesting. Your thoughts will surely be very valuable. Stay connected. π
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Thank you so much for reading and appreciating.
Surely will go through your blog.
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Kritika
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This is fabulous Kritika ππππ
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Glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much π π
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The elevenie is a form unfamiliar to me, but interesting. Love the poem!
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Thank you so much Cheryl. You should try it sometime.
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Such a clever dance this poem leads
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Thank you so much kindly π
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