
Bubbly affectionate warm feeling
Adventurous successful sneaking
Holding hands, glistening eyes
Wearing smile, the young hearts hide
Two souls under the watchful starry sky
Moon lamp making the silhouettes shine
Soft grass forming their comfortable bed
Counting stars whispering promising designs
Aura of this blossoming love
Precious like a Kohinoor diamond
Flying freely on wings of trust
Peace engulfs every eye, watching
by
Kritika
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Young love is always wild. Everything seems to be so perfect. We do things which doesn’t even make sense but it makes us happy. We except each others flaws and wear them as ornaments around our heart. We love passionately and receive the same with same magnitudeπ. But does it remain so forever?
(Just an opinion I thought to shareπ )
It is a very beautiful post highlighting those moments. It was a lovely read as usualπβ€.
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Hey Yash,
Thank you for reading and appreciating the post. ππ»
The answer to your question: Who knows what lies next. We should just enjoy the moments and be happy.
Forever is no word. Humans are meant to change with time, its our non acceptance which hurts. And yes that acceptance is hope and which one develops with time.
This is truly my thinking. Hope this answers your query. π
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Yes, humans change with time and we need to accept it.
Thank you for the answer kritika. π
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My pleasure always π
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Kritika Ji…. It’s beautifulπ…. I suggest you to give your entry for Thursday poem competition by H.R Phoenix….. You can search her name and can give your entry… π
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Thank you so much kindly π
Surely will try my best. πΈ
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Truly beautiful, from start to finish. I also love the detail of the mythical diamond. πππ
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Thank you Lia ππ
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Youβve beautifully captured the beauty of young love in words. Well penned, Kritikaπ
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Thank you so much Nathi β€
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Itβs my pleasure π
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Love gives wings, red bull doesn’t!! ππ
Nice poem!! Keep up, keep sharing.
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Right you are. Thank you for reading and appreciating. π
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A very beautiful romantic poem.
Reads like something written by the young Percy Shelley.
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Thank you so much kindly. π
Have not read his works yet. π
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He’s an excellent poet. π
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Wow. Would read his poetry. Thank you π π
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Itβs just right. It feels as fresh and new as young love itself. It fills me with great starry hope…beautiful Kritika ππβ¨
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Thank you so much kindlyπ
Indeed is filled with hope. πΈππ΄
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Beautiful.
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Thank you Muntazir. πππΈ
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high hands
no bands
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One of the most poetically satisfying posts that I’ve read so far today. Truly magical π
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Thank you for this awesome comment. Happy that you enjoyed reading it. π π
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Very romantic. Every line is so beautiful β€οΈ
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Thank you so much Abhishek. Glad you liked it. π π
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Hahaha
Kabhi kabhi chalta hai. π π
Waise shukriya. Apko ye pasand aya.
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Shukriya π π
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Full of Josh and beautiful K. Eloquently woven!
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Thank you so much kindly πΌπ·
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I so love this – dreamy β€οΈ
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Thank you kindlyπ
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You are welcome
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Lovely and peaceful π
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Thank you kindly π
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Most welcomed πΈπΈ
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Young love…hmmmm let me recall mine…lol…you perfectly created a beautiful reflection of how wonderful it is to love and be loved..
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Thank you so much kindly π
Glad you liked the poem.
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Beautiful. How are you? Havenβt seen your comments on affirmation posts lately. Thought of checking with you!!
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Hey,
I am doing good. Yes, I have missed your affirmation posts. Will be reading them all. Waking up late so missing a lot of posts. π
How are you doing?
Thank you so much for checking on me. A wide smile on my face π
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I am glad to know that you are okay. There is a lot of energy downpour around us these days due to astronomical positions of stars.
I find your comments refreshing too. Thank you very much for replying.
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I agree with you.
Thank you so much for giving me a wide smile again. π
xoxo
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this is really lovely …
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Happy that you enjoyed reading it π
Thank you π π
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a pleasure π
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Beautifully written π π
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Thank you Neha ππ·
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, ππ
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Simply and beautiful.
Just enjoy very much reading this poem.
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Thank you so much Irina. Glad you enjoyed the poem. ππ»
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Ahh! Young love…to love like nothing matters! Well penned, Kritika. β€οΈπ·
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Thank you β€
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My pleasure, dear. β€οΈ
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Lovely portrayal, Kritika! π
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Thank you Mia. π π
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