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Bubbly affectionate warm feeling
Adventurous successful sneaking
Holding hands, glistening eyes
Wearing smile, the young hearts hide

Two souls under the watchful starry sky
Moon lamp making the silhouettes shine
Soft grass forming their comfortable bed
Counting stars whispering promising designs

Aura of this blossoming love
Precious like a Kohinoor diamond
Flying freely on wings of trust
Peace engulfs every eye, watching

by
Kritika

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Published by Kritika

Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA πŸ™‚

62 Comments

  1. Young love is always wild. Everything seems to be so perfect. We do things which doesn’t even make sense but it makes us happy. We except each others flaws and wear them as ornaments around our heart. We love passionately and receive the same with same magnitudeπŸ™‚. But does it remain so forever?

    (Just an opinion I thought to shareπŸ˜…)

    It is a very beautiful post highlighting those moments. It was a lovely read as usualπŸ™‚β€.

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    1. Hey Yash,
      Thank you for reading and appreciating the post. 😊🌻
      The answer to your question: Who knows what lies next. We should just enjoy the moments and be happy.
      Forever is no word. Humans are meant to change with time, its our non acceptance which hurts. And yes that acceptance is hope and which one develops with time.
      This is truly my thinking. Hope this answers your query. πŸ™‚

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  2. Kritika Ji…. It’s beautiful😍…. I suggest you to give your entry for Thursday poem competition by H.R Phoenix….. You can search her name and can give your entry… πŸ˜‡

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    1. Hey,
      I am doing good. Yes, I have missed your affirmation posts. Will be reading them all. Waking up late so missing a lot of posts. πŸ˜€
      How are you doing?
      Thank you so much for checking on me. A wide smile on my face πŸ˜€

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      1. I am glad to know that you are okay. There is a lot of energy downpour around us these days due to astronomical positions of stars.

        I find your comments refreshing too. Thank you very much for replying.

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