rough hands held hers tight, dragging towards the water tide. echoes of their romance created a strong magnetic field, between her lips and his eyes, proof were the blushing cheeks.
questioning mouth wondering at the beating heart. boughs whispering, birds gaping, surroundings watching this coercive start. solitude in partnership was pinching every inch. the time against them, yelling, it not to be like this.
rage of jealousy was reaching an ecstasy, her hand in others hand. calling it off between them, he found to be a waste of time. dragging her towards the water tide,proving their wilful love was more than the word, ‘Divine’.
clandestine moves of nature performed their magic, he expressed his love with one glance. kissing each other, the sky showering blessings. culminated the story of their romance.
by Kritika
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Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA π
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A very romantic and enchanting story. π
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solitude in
partnership was pinching every inch
Beautiful
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It’s beautiful
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a lovely romantic one!
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Well penned! Romance in the air π
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Lovely poem! You tell a very romantic story with powerful images.
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I am heartily happy that you found my words inspiring. I really enjoy the blog reading and writing process. Some blogs give you a mental peace which keeps the day going.
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