
No care for the sky
The bird was meant to fly high
A flutter of breeze
Boughs whispering wake
Silence stains the break of day
Freedom attracts hope
by
Goff James and Kritika Maheshwari
A collaborative effort of Goff James and Kritika (me) wherein Goff has helped me to understand what a Haiku is. Being a free verse writer, it was a little difficult to fit in words according to rules but his cooperation has given a celebrating break to my style of writing, making this collaboration exciting and successful. Thank you kindly for being patient with me.
You can find the same on Goff’s page link: https://goffjamesart.wordpress.com/2020/04/27/spotlight-poetry-no-care-for-the-sky-a-collaborative-poem-by-kritika-maheshwari-and-goff-james/ and do go through more of his works: https://goffjamesart.wordpress.com
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Copying of the content and image without permission is not acceptable. The writers put in their souls in writing a piece of literature. A prior permission of the author of the blog and the collaborating party is mandatory, if in a collaboration, before using the content or the image (which has been created by the author of the blog or the collaborating party in a collaboration).
Very nice.. may I share this on a site of mine credit given to you both?
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Yes you can. π
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https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/04/29/no-care-for-the-sky-kritika-and-geoff-james-in-collaboration/
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Thank you so much kindly π
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Beautiful
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Thank you ππ
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You’re welcome
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Reblogged this on Art, Photography and Poetry.
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Beautifully done, Kritika.
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Thank you kindly ππ
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Wonderful collaboration, Kritika and Goff. Haikus may seem simple but take time to master. π
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Indeed. Thank you kindly ππ€
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You are welcome, dear. π
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beautiful work … it’s always exciting when you achieve another poetry format!
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Yes. Very much interesting and exciting.
Thank you for the constant motivation through your blog posts and comments. π
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my pleasure I assure you, you just keep on growing π
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Indeed. Thank you so much Kate for your constant appreciation. (Hugs)
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Lovely poem & collaboration
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Thank you kindly π
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Well written haiku.
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Thank you kindly π
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Beautiful
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Thank you Navneet. π
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That’s so amazing Kritika.
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Thank you so much π
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Great post!! Wonderful that the two of you are collaborating!!
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Thank you so much kindly π
I am delighted that you liked the Haiku.
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Really great! Hope you are liking collaboration. It is really fun!
Chuck
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Awesome buddies
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Thank you so much friend. π
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Beautiful! π
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A very successful collaboration! I enjoyed the result. I, too, have discovered syllabic poetry only recently, and I’m finding it a good way to express some emotions and experiences that aren’t a good fit with free verse.
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Its exciting to work on something new always. π Thank you kindly π
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You’re welcome, Kritika! I feel the same way about working on something new, particularly when it’s something I’ve never tried before.
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Have a great day π π
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Thanks, Kritika!
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Lovely! You make a good team, Goff and Kritika! π
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Thank you Susi ππ·
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You’re welcome, Kritika! π
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Love to Kansas, how did you know? π
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Nice collaboration! You seem to have mastered writing haiku very quickly. It is fun to have a lot of tools in your kit.
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Goff helped me on the haiku part. It is interesting and fun to learn. π
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In elementary school, we learned about the Renaissance. I remember vividly deciding that I wanted to become a “Renaissance woman” and know everything there was to know. That is, of course, not possible, especially in today’s complex world, but the attempt is a joyful journey.
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Yes, indeed. Thank you so much kindly ππ·β€
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