
The leaf whispered in my ear:
‘Would you like to travel dear?’
A dandelion stared in my eyes:
‘A ride without any price.’
Approval of the palpitating heart.
Nerves throbbing for the journey to start.
Would have to hold the achene tight.
Only fearless choose this risky flight.
Gradually attaining a good height.
Found many like me, the fearless type.
Watching the natures unimaginable beauty.
Honeybees were on the nectar sucking duty.
Landed near the glistening waterfall.
Clearly we all heard its soothing call.
Woods talked about the moon and the stars.
The night was near and home was far.
My achene came to me for a ride back home.
I said,’ Yes please but I would again like to roam.’
@ Kritika
Are you this fearless to experience this dangerous flight?
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Wonderful flight of imagination in this poem, Kritika. π
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This is a lovely poem!
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this is totally beautiful, really love it! A pure joyful flight of fantasy … we have the inner resilience to do it π
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This is really beautiful.
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Such a beautiful poem and invitation to imagination. Lovely.
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Thank you Irina π
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It looks like a magical journey and i love it..
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Ah! A fearless flight! Lovely. π
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Awesome my friend. Have a great day.
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I love this poem. The metaphors, the fantasy… it exults beauty.
Great piece.
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Rhythmic and wonderful!
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Beautiful poem! I like to think I’m fearless but not so sure π€ͺ
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You will be once you hold one achene π. Thank you kindly ππ·
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One of them will come in your dreams to hang on to it tight. Then you shall see the beautiful of land and waterfall. πππ·
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