
built up naked thighs
played the naughty game
the woman turned sensual
hypnotising the handsome face
ransom she did not cared for
witch wanted to drink his blood
coercing him to fall for her
failed every time she spelled the curse
endearing smile he carried
many had bought him coffee
intimidating looks ignited tantrums
the failed ladies later chewed bubblegums
none was aware of his other side
which was blissful and sublime
a vampire blood unaffected by any curse
he could only fall for the innocent style
the heart of the witch flipped
and she preferred to leave the land
now in search of an innocent man
who would hold her blood smeared hand
@ Kritika
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Love this poem, Kritika. β€
It’s right up my alley. π
Love the photo as well. π
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Feeling awesome that you loved it. π
Its one naughty setup by a witch. π
Thank you so much for liking this imaginative writing ππ·
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You’re very welcome, Kritika. ππ»π·
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Love it love it love it. My favorite type of characters. Maybe u can write a book about ur new character. Ponder on that thought doll π€
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This would indeed be beautiful. Thank you kindly ππΈ
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That is some serious gothic-emotional beautiful poem I have ever read. I have read it twice already and on to the third time. β€
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A little funny too as the girls are still chewing bubble gums π. Glad you enjoyed reading it.
Thank you kindly for liking ‘Vampire Gentleman’. ππ·
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Haha.. Yes. π. I really enjoyed!
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Thank you π
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Please, don’t thank me for anything π.
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For being a patient reader and you read it thrice which is cool.π€
Have a good day ππ·
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π you too.
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Love can change a beast into a saint! A wonderful message indeed. Keep it up with your magical words. ππ₯
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Yes. Indeed. Reminds me of Beauty and the Beast by Disney.
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Well done! I can see the whole story before my eyes βΊοΈ
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You are so sweet and kind. Thank you β€π
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Always a joy! βΊοΈπ
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Superπ
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A pleasure! β€οΈβΊοΈ
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Wow – amazing write – I wonder which innocent person is next π
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Lets see who holds the red painted hand. π
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You are welcome
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Creative and interesting. π
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Thank you kindly π
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Lol very creative, Kritika! π
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π Glad it made you laugh. Thank you so much π
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You are welcome, dear. π
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Love the storytelling in this! Well done Kritika! ππ
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Thank you so much ππ»
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Best thing I read today. very, very good
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Thank you so very much ππ
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Well i like the goth touch to the poetry. Well described, you in many ways rule the genre of young adult writing
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Pleased to have this beautiful comment. Thank you so much kindly π
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Lovely piece. Good work
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Thank you ππ·
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