A Cadbury Island

Posted on by Kritika

the melted sweetness you poured
my midriff tasted and asked for more
the lower back readily formed a bridge
your hands slid and held the ridge

the show off of your creative hands
finger tips busy making A Cadbury Island
your never ending aesthetic style
this uniqueness always brings me to smile

the irresistible fervor of your art
simultaneous beats of my heart
cool down process should now begin
soon will have choco lava cake with gin

@ Kritika

Its my birthday tomorrow. So thoughts of cake are in mind though this piece of art could have had a different meaning to it if I would not have ruined the same in the end. It was fun to write this one.

Published by Kritika

Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA 🙂

54 thoughts on “A Cadbury Island”

  15. Hi Kritika. Your masterly penned poem ‘A Cadbury Island’ has haunted my imagination for days. So I have returned to reread it. This time I enjoyed it even more than when I read it first time round. I have now re-blogged. Have a wonderful day.

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    1. Wow. Was it actually this impactful. I am excited to have this comment. Super happy, dancing 💃🎉. Thank you Goff for such a wonderful comment. 😊🌷
      Thank you for the reblog 🙏🥳

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