charm of her face
disturbed many souls
why is she happy?
when life is difficult for us all
‘spreading positivity
from the outside
buried the hurdles
courageously inside’
none knows the truth
peeking and poking
following her like sleuth
ignored they feel as carelessly she moves
‘growing wings to fly
dreams are to reach the sky
sit on the moon and sing
busy crafting her wings’
jealousy causing rage
people are not ashamed
gossiping about her at every stage
finding more wrongs in her fame
‘loving self, she preferred
procrastination always deferred
understanding each and every word
she will soon take off like a powerful bird’
@ Kritika

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Oh Kritika! This is wonderful. β€οΈ Creative and courageous, deep and thoughtful. This is already a favorite of mine of your writing π¦π€β€οΈ
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Wao. I am super happy today. Delighted you loved this piece. Thank you so much ππΉ
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I love this – this is self reliance and being carefree
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Thank you so much for reading. I am glad you liked it π
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My pleasure always
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I love this – self reliance and care free – way to go
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Indeed. Carefree and self made lady.
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My absolute pleasure
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Thank you for sharing this piece with us! Enjoyed reading it a lot! π€π»π
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Glad you enjoyed it Valentina. You are very sweet and kind. Thank you π
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Deep & strong words…Great poem.
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Thank you for appreciating this piece. The words indeed are strong. π
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A very lovely poem, Kritika. β€
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Thank you so much π Really appreciate your comments on my posts which is a constant motivation for me to write.
Have a fun filled Sunday π
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Thanks. π
You as well. π
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Very well written, people do stereotype happiness because sadness is considered default. Good one
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Negative is considered to be a default setting. Positive is simple thus hard to understand. Really appreciate your thoughts on this piece.
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Welcome π
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Great writing. I’d like to share this on a poetry site of mine, full credit given.. with your permission, of course. π Let me know if you have any objections. Cheers.
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Thank you so much for reading and appreciating this piece. π
It is an honour for me to be on your blog. π Thank you so much ππ
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It’s good writing π Cheers.
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Cheers π
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Beautifully penned. Love the way you have created and contrasted the imagery.
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Thank you so much for appreciating ππ
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My pleasure. Loved the experimental manner in which you constructed the poem. great piece of writing.
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Happy that you loved the construction of the poem. π
Thank you Goff π
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Cheers. Best Regards.
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Amazing!
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Glad you liked it.
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This is so wonderfully written, loved it! π
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Thank you Tone πππ·
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Always happy to share your posts, Kritika!!
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Damn beautiful! Very relatable!! πβ£οΈ
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Delighted you liked this piece of art. Thank you so much for your kind comment ππ
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You too Kritika, have a beautiful day! β£οΈ
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Thank you, Wild Heart π
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A brave, bold, beautiful piece. Loved it. β₯οΈ
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Glad you loved this piece of writing, Divya. Thank you for admiring and visiting my blog. π
Have a great day.
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