
the ink on the nib
treated my torn heart
filled pages with afflicting words
fixing fissures which caused harm
ranting in metaphors
the outrage I wished to cause
smearing blank pages with red
like his blood on the marble floor
alas
this beauty mistaken to be a beast
is a self made figure of nobility
afraid be you, as her sword is a pen
will pierce your veins, till you fully comprehend
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I guess in terms of blood spilled, the pen is mightier than the sword.
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Yes, indeed. Thank you for reading π
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“The ink of Kritika
is more sacred than
the blood of the martyr.”
~ Me π
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Helpless in the case of a martyr thoughπ
Thank you for reading and commenting. Have a great day π
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wow… powerful! Nicely written π
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Thank you for reading and appreciating π
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Writing is very healing, treating our torn heart. Well done π
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It does. But yes the words come later π
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you so much ππ
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Reblogged this on Art, Photography and Poetry.
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Thank you for the reblog Goff. π
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My pleasure. Cheers.
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Cheers π
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Happy Day.
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Hi. Thanks for sharing such a masterly penned poem. Powerful, juiced with evocative imagery. Keep up the excellent work.Happy Writing.
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Super happy for such a beautiful comment. Thank you so much Goff for these appreciating words. Would surely try to.
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My great pleasure. Happy Writing.
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Wish the same to you π
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Have a great day.
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So sweetly written
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You are sweet. Thank you for reading and appreciating ππ
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Good one!
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Glad you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and appreciating ππ
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Great piece! I am going to follow you also on Instagram.
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Glad you enjoyed this Beauty. This is awesome ππ Pleased to connect on instagram π
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Me too! βοΈπ»π€
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masterfully written!
sounds like a threat and that last line says it all π
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Delighted you liked it. ππ₯³
Thank you so much, Kate πΌ
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my pleasure, you write well Kritika π
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Your words made my year π. You are awesome π
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but you are more awesome π
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Loads of hugs ππ€
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Woah! Love this Kritika! πΈ
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You are so sweet. Thank you ππ
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Wow ππ» just loved this
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Glad you loved this piece. Thank you for this beautiful comment π π
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You’re always welcomeπ do visit my blog too as I’m new here πππ»
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Surely would do. Thank you for visiting mine π
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Well it was really my pleasure to visit your blog
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Thank you for these kind words π
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Provocative and distinctly profound Kritika, very nicely penned and expressed – loved this π
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Thank you for these beautiful words for this piece. Means a lot to me. Thank you ππΌπ
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Again, my pleasure π
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Wow thatβs deep!
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Thank you for visiting and reading this piece of art. Delighted you liked it ππΌπ
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you ππΈ
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