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Roughly she spread some cards
for the buyer to choose and pick
he did it because of a reason
his life, he was not able to fix

Life is making him to rub his shoes.
Life is full of sufferings he did not choose.
he wanted life to be easy and smooth
the cards said he would have to donate his tooth.

He thought about it at large
had spent most of his money in bars
tired did not want the life to take charge
a tooth might make him the in-charge

Cards made him to donate the tooth
now he is unable to eat the food
his wife no longer considers him a dude
sadly he said, ‘now it is worse than good’

Life smilingly said,’I am the way I should.
There was no need to give up the tooth.
You yourself made it worse than you could.
It is in your hands to make it bad or good.’

@ Kritika

Please, please, please do comment. I am laughing with this piece created by my random mind with no sense of what effect will it give. Its just for fun and some smiles.

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  1. Quite wonderful!! I loved it Kritika! A good dose of truth wrapped up in some giggles. We can make a terrible mess of things at times, can’t we πŸ˜‚. Well done πŸ₯°πŸŒŸπŸŒ·πŸ’

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    1. I still am laughing at this cute mess which I made. Super happy that you laughed. Gaining smiles was my motive. πŸ˜πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ₯³πŸ˜„ Thank you for liking 🦷 less.

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