
Roughly she spread some cards
for the buyer to choose and pick
he did it because of a reason
his life, he was not able to fix
Life is making him to rub his shoes.
Life is full of sufferings he did not choose.
he wanted life to be easy and smooth
the cards said he would have to donate his tooth.
He thought about it at large
had spent most of his money in bars
tired did not want the life to take charge
a tooth might make him the in-charge
Cards made him to donate the tooth
now he is unable to eat the food
his wife no longer considers him a dude
sadly he said, ‘now it is worse than good’
Life smilingly said,’I am the way I should.
There was no need to give up the tooth.
You yourself made it worse than you could.
It is in your hands to make it bad or good.’
@ Kritika
Please, please, please do comment. I am laughing with this piece created by my random mind with no sense of what effect will it give. Its just for fun and some smiles.
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Thank you for reading. Gained one smile today π
Have a great day π
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You’ll gain lot many! π
You are welcome.
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Ha ha. Nicely written. Sounds painful and hilarious at the same time π
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Glad you liked it and smiled. ππ Thank you for readingπ₯³ Second one for the day π
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Beautiful
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Happy you felt it to be beautiful. π Hope it brought a smile too. Have a great day π
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Wishing you lovely day ahead
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Thank you π
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This is goofy and funny, what seem like a mystical start soon converted to humor. It definitely made me laugh, quite out of box thinking and writing π
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Haha. Thank you so much for reading and appreciating ππ Hope you had a great laugh. Have a cheerful day ππ₯³
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Yes i did, thanks for writing and sharing.
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Spreading smiles π Welcome π
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It’s a great poem. It tells an entertaining and meaningful story.
xoxo
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Glad that you liked it. Thank you so much π
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He he….
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Glad you laughed π Thank you for reading. Have a great day π₯³π
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Have a great day too. π€
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But it is true that – “It is in your hands to make it bad or good”.
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Very much indeed. Thank you for reading π Have a great day π₯³π
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Wonderful π
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Thank you for reading. Happy to share a laugh. π
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Quite wonderful!! I loved it Kritika! A good dose of truth wrapped up in some giggles. We can make a terrible mess of things at times, canβt we π. Well done π₯°ππ·π
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I still am laughing at this cute mess which I made. Super happy that you laughed. Gaining smiles was my motive. ππππ₯³π Thank you for liking π¦· less.
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My smiling pleasure! π₯³ππ€©π
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Very witty humourus poem. π
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π Glad you enjoyed and laughed. Thank you so much for this wonderful comment. π
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like your humorous take on a great morale … made me smile π
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Thank you so much. I am really glad that you enjoyed it. Its nice to make people laugh for a while ππ
Have a great weekend Kate. ππ
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Excellent poem! I love the meaning. β€οΈ
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Amazing. I am happy that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you so much for reading and appreciating ππ
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Being a dentist, yes! The post is damn cool ππ
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Awesome. Glad you found the post cool. Thank you so much Doctor. π
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