Chalk Particles

Blackboard duster with chalk istockphoto.com

my innocence
wrote love words
on a blackboard
with white chalk

your eyes saw
and blinked
the white duster
you picked

slowly wiped
the words
the heart started
to hurt

dust particles
on the floor spread
were the broken pieces
of my heart, now dead

by
Kritika

Published on The Poetry Bar with the link: https://lunatheblog.com/2020/06/08/chalk-particles/

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Published by Kritika

Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA 🙂

26 Comments

    1. Will add a happy ending to one of them. Lets see what the heart wants. 😊🙂
      Thank you for appreciating and liking most of the posts today as well. 🎉🥳
      Have a great weekend friend. 👍🌷

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      1. Life is full of changes. If the mind is firm heart always be positive and happy ending always. Good things to read a short poems are so meaningful way to express. You have a talent to write and make it more expressive. All the best. Cheers. Happy Saturday and good wishes.

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      2. I agree with you MercuryTwin and I am glad you added your thoughts.
        Thank you so much for appreciating. Means a lot to me. Cheers 👍
        Have a great saturday yourself 🎉🥳

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      3. You are welcome. I am glad to read and relax and absorb the best of the lines. Amazing talent to make poems that I don’t have. I found a view finder to collect best images I watch always. My blog is to display my collection of best shoot images around my travel. Pls visit my small web page when you find time. Thank you being kind to respond. I treasure the communications. You can Call me Victor.
        Happy week end. 🙏 🌹 🌷 🌿

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      4. I am so happy to have connected with you Victor. A smile brightens a day. Positivity floats and your blog is amazing. I will definitely read through your blog. Its an honour for me. 😊🙏
        Have a great weekend. 🎉🥳

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