Empty Inside Out

I am feeling a lot weird
either I dont know me
obviously I dont know the world
its so empty inside and out
no one I blame
but I never understood the crowd

moving out just to meet the mass
all I like is the green grass
walking barefoot on empty side walk
I feel to watch more and no talk
a question of my weirdness
is positively raised
to me cafes and restaurants are no praise
for they let you sit till they earn
suffocated I wish time to run

Am I wrong to want to look for that one art work?
similar in fashion to my dream world?
because I am a complacent being
self praising and for self living
dejected I might make you feel
but is it you or is it me?

©Kritika

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Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA 🙂 View all posts by Kritika

9 Comments

Poet of the Light says:

October 14, 2019 at 1:10 AM

Perhaps its neither a ‘you or me” issue and its circumstances of life instead?

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1. KRITIKA says:
  
  October 17, 2019 at 2:26 PM
  
  I am so sorry to reply so late. It was in the spam folder and I saw it today.
  
  Yes. Completely agree. I didnt saw it this way though. Thank you so much for reading. 🙂
  
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  1. Poet of the Light says:
    
    October 17, 2019 at 11:06 PM
    
    Better late than never 🙂
    I understand.
    
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  2. KRITIKA says:
    
    October 17, 2019 at 11:09 PM
    
    Thank you 🙂
    
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adiscardedplant says:

October 14, 2019 at 10:54 AM

So true, and well represented!!

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1. KRITIKA says:
  
  October 14, 2019 at 4:35 PM
  
  So good to have such compliments. Thank you so much for reading. 🙂
  
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  1. adiscardedplant says:
    
    October 14, 2019 at 4:40 PM
    
    You are very welcome, Kritika!! 🙂
    
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Manoj Mehra says:

November 27, 2020 at 5:33 PM

This is so me ‘I feel to watch more and no talk’.

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1. Kritika says:
  
  December 10, 2020 at 5:18 PM
  
  Happy the lines resonated with you. Thank you kindly 🙂
  
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