Focus on chocolate bite

Posted on by Kritika

I pick my pen to write
Just not about hate love this time
As I am no judge of his behaviour
To blame him is only hurting self dear

Leave his memories behind
They were good times
This is what I try to accept
Free will is the basic concept

I know I was in good hands
Might land with better one
But writing and cursing him
Is only damaging my own self

Saying yes to dishonest germs
Conscious disapproving such terms
Nothing was wrong more than my yes
I don’t think I should take stress

Actually am feeling light
Writing about not stressing feels delight
Shifting focus to what is right
Changes are necessary
Going to grab a chocolate bite 🙂

©Kritika

Published by Kritika

Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA 🙂

15 thoughts on “Focus on chocolate bite”

  2. Oh, My Dear!! I can so identify with the feelings you expressed in your poem!! I lived those feelings too for about a year and a half after my wife left me for her boyfriend (was the best thing ever to happen to me, as I later found out when I met the Angel I’ve been married to for 20 years). They have provided a wealth of inspiration over the years for my poetry – thankfully, without having to feel the old feelings of hurt. I hope this is a lookback poem for you and if not, then I hope time will soon heal the pain and you can only have “Lookback Poem” to write about!

    Perhaps, you may be able to identify with my – Her Mosaic Heart, if you haven’t read it yet??
    https://thereluctantpoetweb.wordpress.com/2018/04/02/her-mosaic-heart/
    Hope you have a happy day!!
    xoxo 🌹🌹

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    1. Thank you so much. Means so much to me that my words convey the meaning which I sewed.
      Passing through different people and comprehending the meaning of their existence, being of value, in ones life. Only time teaches but never one can erase the memories of the precious moments spend. The future self only adores the happy times and time to time smiles looking back to those memories.
      I will definitely go through your poem. Your words have truly made my sulken self a lot happy. 🙂🙂

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      1. Oh My, Kritika! I really love that your words reach out to this Little Ol’ Poet’s heart! They mean alot to me as touchstones to my past! Your words are definitely beautiful threads in the tapestry of your poems!! I have stated that a true poet has their words reach out and touch the heart of the reader’s! So, just in case you may doubt yourself from time to time like I have done – remember “You are a Poet” – You can use me as exhibit Z. LOL!

        Here are a couple of other poets on WP I follow that you might enjoy:
        https://christophermcgeownwriting.com
        https://thesarahdoughty.wordpress.com/2019/10/21/loving-anyway-2/ I think you will really enjoy her work
        https://sacredtouches.com/2019/03/18/get-up-every/ Natalie passed this last spring but her family has kept her blog up for us. Wonderful inspiration and quotes.
        Chuck
        xoxo

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      2. Enjoyed your lovely comments today. Filled with enthusiasm and energy I am after conversing with you. Inspiring me to write more. 😊
        Surely will go through the mentioned blogs. I enjoy reading poems. Thank you for sharing. 🙂
        So sorry for Natalie. May her soul rest in peace.

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